Wednesday, January 30, 2013

Story Prize and Booker International Prize Shortlists, 2013


I try to read as many new short story collections as I possibly can, but even though, (compared with the novel) not that many short story collections are published each year, alas, I do not have the time to read them all.  I rely on the recommendations of my readers, other bloggers, reviewers, and friends.  I also pay special attention to the collections that get shortlisted for the various prizes.

Two important prizes that have recently announced their shortlists are the American-based Story Prize, and the British-based Man Booker International Prize. The Story Prize only considers collections of short stories, whereas the Man Booker International Award is given to a writer for his or her life’s work.  Of the ten authors (all identified as “novelists) who made the Man Booker shortlist, three are also well known for their short stories:

The Story Prize Shortlist for 2013

Stay Awake by Dan Chaon (Ballantine Books)
This Is How You Lose Her by Junot Díaz (Riverhead Books)
Battleborn by Claire Vaye Watkins (Riverhead Books)
(Winner will be announced on March 13, 2013)

The Man Booker International Prize Shortlisted Authors Known for Short Stories:

Lydia Davis
Peter Stamm
Josip Novakovich
(Winner will be announced on May 22)

I will be commenting on the three Story Prize shortlisted books during February and the following books of the three Man Booker authors known for their short stories during the month of March: 

Lydia Davis, The Collected Stories
Peter Stamm, We’re Flying,
Josip Novakovich, Infidelities, Yolk, and Salvation and Other Disasters

Also during February and March, I will also be reading the two collections of short stories from The New York Times 100 Notable Books of 2012 that I had not yet previously read and commented on:

The Book of Mischief by Steve Stern
Married Love by Tess Hadley

If any of you are interested in reading along with me, I would be happy to discuss any of these ten books with you in the next couple of months.

I am working daily on my book on Reading the Short Story, aka How to Read Short Stories, and think I have a pretty good idea now what the structure of the book will look like.  I will be posting on my progress this spring and summer and hope to have the book finished by the fall.

Monday, January 28, 2013

Memoir or Story? Munro, Moody, and Me



I have been reading and rereading the four pieces in the “Finale” section of Alice Munro’s new collection Dear Life.  Munro calls them “not quite stories,” forming a unit that she calls “autobiographical in feeling, though not, sometimes, entirely so in fact.”  She says she believes they are “the first and last—and the closest—things I have had to say about my own life.”

I have already written about one of these memoirs—the title piece that appeared earlier in The New Yorker.”   You can find it by typing “dear life” in the “search” line on the top right. The remaining three pieces—“The Eye,” “Night,” and “Voices,”—are interesting to me because they provide the opportunity to explore the differences between “memoir” and “short story.”

As usual, I did a little research on this relationship between memoir and story by typing the following in Google: “memoir vs. short story.” And the first thing that came up was a blog entry I wrote three years ago, and damn all, if it didn’t focus on a story by Alice Munro (“Some Women.”)!  I am not sure I have anything new to say about the issue of memoir vs. story, vis-à-vis Alice Munro, but you never know until you start exploring.

Munro has said that she has based many of her stories on her own life.  That is not unusual, of course.  But the question I want to explore is: What is the difference between an anecdote of an actual event in one’s life and a short story based on that anecdote?

If you do some research on the memoir/fiction topic, you primarily will find discussions on the issue of “truth,” that is, did the event recounted “really happen”?  This is a common question members of the audience often pose to writers at “readings.”  Indeed, it is probably one of the first questions children ask when you tell them a bedtime story?  I used to tell my children a story about being chased by a huge bull while picking blackberries in a pasture near my childhood home.  They were more impressed with the story when I told them it really happened; they would have been less engaged if I had told them it was “made-up.”

This, of course, is one of the reasons why biographies and autobiographies are more popular than fiction; if the work is just a “story,” it seems less important, less interesting, less “real.”  The flap about James Frey’s A Million Little Pieces raised the ethical question about fictionalizing one’s life experiences and calling it “memoir.”  However, more pressing than the ethical question is the profit question:  Narratives billed as an account of what actually happened simply sell better than narratives labeled as fiction.

Although this issue is most often raised with long fictions, it does occasionally crop up with short fictions.  For example, when Rick Moody’s short piece "Demonology" was first published, it was listed as a memoir.  However, the following year, it was included in Prize Stories:  The O. Henry Awards for 1997.  When asked to comment on the work for the O. Henry Award collection, Moody said there were few things he has written that he would rather talk about less than this.  However, he once told an interviewer that he is always tying to muddy the surface of the nonfictional with fictional techniques by paying particular attention to form and structure.  What makes "Demonology" so affecting are Moody's efforts to transform a powerful personal experience into something that has universal significance. 

The title of the piece stems from the fact that the sister's death from arrhythmia takes place within the context of Halloween, her children dressed as demons and monsters, beating back the restless souls of the dead in search of sweets.  This demon motif is repeated throughout the story until ultimately the sister is transformed into a "revenant" that compels Moody to find a way to use language to communicate his grief.  The story ends with Moody, in a common self-referential tactic, considering how he should have constructed his memoir, telling himself he probably should have fictionalized it more, for example, conflating the sister's two children into one and making her boyfriend a husband.  He says he should have let artifice create an elegant surface for the story, thus making his sister's death shapely and persuasive rather than blunt and disjunctive. However, it is precisely the blunt, barely restrained, voice that makes the story so powerful.

As a student of the short story, what interests me most about the blurry line between story and memoir is not the ethical or the economical issue, but the aesthetic one: Is there a basic difference in technique and thematic significance between a short story and a short memoir?

We might ask, why did Alice Munro give us “The Eye” as a memoir rather than a story?  Was it because she felt the event that she recalls from when she was five years old—her first encounter with death—would not have yielded a complex story, but only a cliché?  Of course, it is unlikely that Munro can recall in such detail the events of something that happened when she was five; it is more likely that she recalls some of the events from what her mother has told her over the years, whereas other aspects of the recollection may have actually been invented over the years.  But what difference does that make?

Munro might very well have made the event recounted in “The Eye” into a story, for the child’s fascination with the romantic life of the hired girl Sadie and her ambiguous relationship with her mother can be seen in a number of Munro’s stories. The central thematic issue has something to do with the scene of the child looking down into the coffin and seeing the eyelid of the dead girl lifting just a tiny bit. This does not frighten the child, but rather it “falls into everything” that she knows about Sadie and also “into whatever special experience was owing to myself.”  There is a sense of recognition here, a sense of identity, not the sense that a five-year-old would feel, but rather a sense that a woman would later remember as a mutual understanding.

The short piece “Night” is a much more discursive account, based largely on thinking about something rather than on seeing or doing something.  We do not know the age of the child in this piece, but she is old enough, or young enough, to have some fantasies about strangling her younger sister during the night, and she loses sleep about it. Her brief talk with her father one night when she walks out of the house is enough to make her identify with him and to appreciate his wisdom. For when she tells him about her fantasies of strangling her sister, he says not to worry, for “People have those kinds of thoughts sometimes.”  And she knows that he has given her just what she needed to hear.

In “Voices,” Munro is ten years old and accompanies her mother to a dance in a home to which a prostitute has brought one of her girls.  But it is not the girl that so fascinates the young Munro; rather it is the talk she overhears of some of the Air Force men stationed nearby who try to comfort the young woman, and she marvels at how they bow down and declare themselves in front of her. Later, she thinks of those men, and hears their voices directed to her: “Their hands blessed my own skinny thighs and their voices assured me that I, too, was worthy of love.”  This fascination with mysterious sexuality and the risky business of becoming thought desirable to men is a common theme in many of Munro’s stories.  Of these three short memoir pieces, “Voices” is, because of this thematic echo, the closest to merging into the realm of fiction.

For me, the difference between the recounting of an actual event and a fictional event has nothing to do with whether the event actually occurred, but rather whether the event “means” anything.  My own experience with writing fiction is minimal. Although I have several notebooks of observations, recollections, and descriptions, I have only published two stories.  Both stories are based on actual events, although they did not all happen at the same time; rather they are disparate fragments that seemed to “go together” thematically.  I think putting the various “real life” events together in the way I did by providing for them a “point of view” actually resulted in “stories.”  However, I still have many recollections in my notebooks that remain simply that—recollections. I will provide one example of what I think is a recollection that could, with the right point of view and the right context, become a story.

When I was young, my maternal grandmother lived in the country on a farm, and I recall her in that rural context.  However, my father’s mother was a “city girl,” although the “city” where I lived was a small Kentucky mountain town of approximately 4,000 people.  My “city grandmother” seemed more sophisticated than my country grandmother, although she only had a high school education.  I have many memories of her, of course, but one image sticks in my mind, although I am not sure I ever actually saw it or whether I created it out of the “late show” 1940s movies that I stayed up and watched the whole summer the first year we got television. 

Here is the image: 

The Paintsville Hotel is on the main street of town, just two doors down from the Greyhound bus station, which I remember as the center of exciting activity.  Between the two is the Kentucky Cafe where I occasionally stopped to play the pinball machine and get a cherry joke.  In front of the Hotel the sidewalk is made of glass brick.  The barber shop, where my paternal grandfather, always dressed in a white shirt and black bowtie, cut my hair, was just below, and because he always keep a light on there all night, a glow came up through the glass bricks so that when you walked across them it was like something out a Busby Berkely musical.  What I remember is my grandmother in a black dress and a long black coat with a high fur collar. The collar is pushed up on her neck so that it met her short white hair.  She has on heels and I see her walking down the street toward me, past the bus station, past the Kentucky Cafe, and onto the glass bricks that give a radiance to her nyloned legs.  Her head is high, and her pelvis is thrust forward a bit; she looks slightly amused at something. She walks fast, her arms across her breasts, and the breeze her motion makes stirs the fur around her neck. 

That is only a memoir image, but placed in the right context with the right point of view, some meaningful narrative movement, and related thematic details, it could be a story, don’t  you think?  Whether it happened or not is not important.

Tuesday, January 22, 2013

The Secret Life in the Short Story and William Trevor's "The Women"



Although many readers agree that Alice Munro and William Trevor are the two greatest short story writers in the world today, Munro, whose most recent book, Dear Life, has been on bestseller lists for several weeks, is the more active of the two and usually attracts more attention than Trevor when one of their stories appears in The New Yorker.

Trevor has not had a story in that magazine since “The Woman of the House” on Dec. 15, 2008, whereas Munro has published most of her Dear Life stories there in the past few years. (My blog entry on “The Woman of the House” is in my archives)

Although Munro’s stories, especially those in The New Yorker, often attracts a lot of blog review attention, Trevor’s new story, “The Women,” which appeared on January 14, 2013, has attracted very little, with the Irish Writing Blog opening with “it’s fair to say that the reaction to William Trevor’s latest New Yorker story has been a bit mixed.”

Indeed, on his blog, Clifford Garstang has called “The Women” a simple cliché story about an unwed mother who has given up her child and then later tries to find her, concluding that although William Trevor may be one of our greatest short story writers, “this one seems to have been written in his sleep.” So there, Mr. Trevor, wake up!

The writer on the blog entitled “New Yorker Story Critiques Blog,” says he/she likes the premise or the plot of the story, but “finds the execution lacking,” with lots of digressions and superfluities that “bleed the main story arc of tension.”  The blogger says he/she tried skipping over the offending sections and found the story “much improved.”  So there, Mr. Trevor, get yourself a decent editor and do it his/her way instead of your own!

On the other hand, there is the always thoughtful blog “The Mookse and The Gripes,” graciously managed by Trevor Berette, which opens with, “It was a beautiful thing to find a new William Trevor story in this week’s issue of The New Yorker.  Obviously reading the story more attentively than Clifford Garstang and the anonymous New Yorker Critiques blogger, Berette says “The Women” is about the kind of quiet sadness that does not go away as we age, admiring the “careful style that brings us so close to the source of pain and the desire to turn away from it that makes this such a powerful story…It’s the secret pain that these people feel they cannot share, so carefully rendered, that makes this story come to life.”  Indeed, and what also makes the story a classic of the genre.

I recommend that you take a look at the extended debate about Trevor’s “The Women” on “The Mookse and the Gripes” blog.  The reader Betsy provides a detailed close reading that tries to account for the story’s sense of secrecy and mystery by accusing the father of abuse of the daughter, similar to that in Nabokov’s Lolita.  Berette doesn’t think the background is that “sinister,” but Betsy is not to be denied, suspicious of the father/daughter travel in Europe and the priest who has arranged for the transfer of the child from unwed mother to unhappy father. Berette agrees there is something “haunting” about the story, even something a “bit creepy,” but does not think it is parental abuse.  Then reader Ken joins in, trying to mediate the debate over the something “sinister” in the story, concluding that the story is about the ambiguity of how lies can both serve us and harm us and others.  Betsy remains “concerned” for the young Cecilia.

Sensing that the debate about what is “secret and sinister” in the story has run its course, reader Ken concludes that the story is “endlessly interesting,” and (perhaps because it has created so much debate about the mystery behind the story), a “masterpiece.”  A new reader, Roger, agrees. And the debate ends with Betsy somewhat relieved about her fears of child abuse, hoping there will be another William Trevor coming along soon.

I summarize this little debate on The Mookse and the Gripes blog not only because I so enjoy good close readers energetically engaging with a complex short story, but because the sense of the sinister and secrecy and mystery evidenced in “The Women” seems to me to be so typical of the kind of human reality that the short story as a genre does so well.

I wrote a piece a few years ago about this “secret life” aspect of the short story as a genre, and would like to share a few passages in the hope that I might provide a context for understanding William Trevor’s story as well as the lively debate on The Mookse and The Gripes blog.

A central problem for short-story writers in the nineteenth century was how to use newly developed eighteenth-century conventions of realism to communicate spiritual meaning formerly explored allegorically in the mythic romance.  In the older tale or romance form, characters functioned as psychic projections of basic human fears and desires; in the new fiction, the characters had to be presented as if they were real.  Early nineteenth-century writers solved the problem by combining conventions of allegorical romance and realistic fiction.  In "Young Goodman Brown," for example, Hawthorne joined allegorical and realistic elements in an ambiguous mix of dream and reality in which his protagonist sometimes seems motivated by the demands of the allegory and sometimes by the demands of his own psyche.
            In "The Fall of the House of Usher," Edgar Allan Poe presented an “as if” real character entering the hermetically-sealed world of the artwork dominated by an obsessed and ultimately metaphoric character.  And in "Bartleby, the Scrivener," Herman Melville moved closer to realistic conventions by beginning with what appears to be the "real world,” only to have that world invaded by an emblematic character who transforms reality into metaphor.  The problem for all three of these early narrative experimentalists was how to bridge the gap between romance conventions, in which characters embody psychic states, and realistic conventions, in which characters possess individual psyches. By rejecting the supernatural and suggesting the strangeness of life as a function of individual psychology, the nineteenth-century short story no longer presented the drama of the clash between the sacred and the profane as existing in realm of the spiritual, but rather in the minds of the individual.
However, it is not until the end of the nineteenth century that Chekhov, the great master of the short story, perfected the form’s ability to present spiritual reality in realistic terms by focusing on the essentially mysterious and hidden nature of the basic human desire to transcend the everyday and live in the realm of spiritual reality.  Critic Peter Bitsilli has suggested that the complexity of Chekhov's characters leads us to feel there is something about them we do not understand, a something hidden from us, a something that is part of Chekhov's appeal.  Although the theme of the basic desire of the secret self could be illustrated in any number of Chekhov’s short fictions, the paradigmatic statement can be found in one of his most famous stories, “Lady with the Dog.”  Near the end of what seems to be merely an anecdotal tale of adultery, the central male character agonizes over the division he senses in himself.
He had two lives:  one, open, seen and known by all who cared to know, full of relative truth and of relative falsehood, exactly like the lives of his friends and acquaintances; and another life, running its course in secret. And through some strange, perhaps accidental, conjunction of circumstances, everything that was essential, of interest, and of value to him, everything in which he was sincere and did not deceive himself, everything that made the kernel of his life, was hidden from other people; and all that was false in him, the sheath in which he hid himself to conceal the truth—such, for instance, as his work in the bank, his discussions at the club, his “lower race,” his presence with his wife at anniversary festivities—all that was open.

 In Chekhov’s great story, the secrecy of Gurov’s idealized desire constitutes true reality for him, just as the sacred constituted true reality for primitive man and woman.  Indeed, in the modern short story, idealized human desire--unsayable, unrealizable, always hovering, like religious experience in the realm of the "not yet"--replaces the sacred revelation embodied in primal short-fiction forms.  When Anna leaves, Gurov thinks it has been just another episode or adventure in his life, nothing left but a memory that would visit him only from time to time.  But she haunts him, and he imagines her to be lovelier and himself to be finer than they actually were in Yalta.  The story ends with the couple agonizing about how to avoid the secrecy and to be free of their intolerable bondage.  “How?  How?” Gurov asks.  But, of course there is no answer, no way that the romantic, spiritual ideal they store up in their ghostly hearts can ever be actualized, except, of course, as it is manifested in the short story—as the immanent, the “not yet.”
             James Joyce confronted the quintessential problem of the modern short story in "The Dead": How is it possible for a realistic narrative to convey meaning and significance?  It is the same problem that Chekhov had to deal with--how to arrange concrete details in such a way that they develop into a pattern equivalent to theme.  Joyce's achievement in this story, its contribution to the development of the short story as a genre, can be best understood if we see its most basic theme as the difference between the kind of reality that realistic prose imitates and the kind of reality that romantic prose reveals. 
              Thematically, the conflict in "The Dead" that reflects its realistic/lyrical split is the difference revealed to both Gabriel and the reader between public life and private life, between life as it is in everyday experience and life perceived as the objectification of desire. The party portion of "The Dead" is the story of Gabriel's public life, and his only psychic interest is what kind of figure he is going to cut publicly.  However, throughout the party period of the story, there are moments--particularly those moments that focus on the past, on music, and on marital union--when reality is not presented as here and now, but as a mixture of memory and desire.   Thematically, the basic issue the story poses is:  In which one of these realms does true reality reside?   Gabriel's discovery at the end of the story is not only that his wife has an inner life inaccessible to him but that his own life has been an outer life only. Filled with desire and the memory of intimacy, wishing Gretta to at one with him, Gabriel is annoyed that she seems so distracted.  When he discovers that she has a secret life that has nothing to do with him, he tries to use his typical public devices of irony, but the very simplicity of her story undercuts the effort, and he sees the inadequacy of his public self. 
             In the much-discussed lyrical ending of "The Dead," Gabriel confronts the irony that the dead Michael is more alive than he is.  "Generous tears" fill his eyes because he knows that he has never lived the life of desire, only the untransformed life of the everyday.  The ending, in which Gabriel, awake and alone while his wife sleeps beside him, allows himself to lose self and imaginatively merge into a mythic lyrical sense of oneness, makes it possible for the reader to begin the story over again with this end in mind.  "The Dead" is not a story that can be understood the way most novels are read--one thing after another--but the way the modern short story must be read--aesthetically patterned in such a way that only the end makes the rest of the story meaningful. 
             The theme of the inaccessibility of the private life and the inadequacy of public life is most emphatically explored in Sherwood Anderson's Winesburg, Ohio The most frequent remark made about the characters in Winesburg, Ohio is that they are psychic deformities, cut off from society, adrift in their own consciousness.  The story that most centrally focuses on Anderson’s effort to explore the secret life of his Winesburg grotesques is “Hands.”  Anderson’s suggestion that the secret of Biddlebaum's hands is a job for a poet is part of the basic change in the short story signaled by Chekhov.  Anderson struggles with the problem of the prose writer trying to communicate something subtle and delicate, feeling the words are clumsy, for all he has are the events and explanation.  What he needs is a way to use language the way the poet does, to transcend language. 
              The hidden, secret self is a persistent characteristic of the modern short story as a genre, understood by writers who know the form well and have mastered it.  This could easily be illustrated in any number of well-known stories by Andre Dubus, Raymond Carver, Alice Munro, and other modern masters of the form.  For example, in Munro’s best work, the hidden story of emotion and secret life, communicated by atmosphere and tone, is always about something more enigmatic and unspeakable than the story generated by characters and what happens next. 
            William Trevor’s “The Women” is a story about how “fragments make a whole,” about loss, melancholy, uncertainty, secrecy, need, desperation, desire for the truth, fear of the truth, being of two minds, playing roles, being haunted by the past, having regrets, hating the truth, making something better than the truth, abandoning “stern reality for what imagination more kindly offered.”  The story ends with Cecilia not knowing the truth, for her father has chosen not to tell her, and thinking that the two women have invented this “shadowland” and kept it alive in the “bluster of daring and pretense.”   Although Cecilia knows this is a flimsy exercise in supposition, both tenuous and vague, she reaches out for its “whisper of consoling doubt.” 
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The hidden story of emotion and secret life, communicated by atmosphere, tone, and mood is always about something more unspeakable, more mysterious, than the story generated by the reader’s focus on characters and on what happens next.  The genius of the short story form is that whereas they often could indeed be the seedbeds of novels, they do not communicate as novels do.  And if we try to read them as if they were novels, they will never haunt us with their sense of that mysterious secret life within all of us.

Monday, January 7, 2013

The Three Endings of Alice Munro’s story “Corrie”


Like all good short-story writers, Alice Munro often makes revisions to her stories between the time they first appear in a journal or magazine and when they appear later in an anthology or in a collection under her own name.  She has twice made changes to the ending of her short story “Corrie,” which first appeared in the Oct. 11, 2010 issue of The New Yorker—first in The PEN/O. Henry Awards anthology and second in her latest collection, Dear Life.  She also changed the name of one of the characters in the Dear Life version of the story from Sadie to Lillian.

 The story focuses on Corrie’s affair with a married man named Howard Ritchie.  Howard tells Corrie that he and his wife have gone to a dinner party and saw the woman Sadie Wolfe (Lillian Wolfe in Dear Life), who once worked for Corrie. He says he later received a letter from this woman, threatening to tell his wife about his affair with Corrie.

Later in the story when Sadie/Lillian dies, Corrie goes to a reception following the funeral and meets a woman who Sadie/Lillian also worked for.  All who knew Sadie/Lillian agree that she was blessed, a rare person. Later that night, Corrie thinks about all this and realizes that Sadie/Lillian was not the kind of person to blackmail anyone.  (Maybe Munro changes her name from “Sadie” to “Lillian” because whereas a woman named Sadie might be a blackmailer, a woman named Lillian might not.)

One of the ambiguities of the story results from the point of view Munro uses when Howard tells Corrie about the blackmail threat. The dinner party encounter is described primarily not as if Howard is telling Corrie about it, but rather as if it actually happened, although all Corrie and the reader know about the blackmail threat comes from Ritchie’s account. Munro makes a minor change in the Dear Life version to remind us that Ritchie’s story is the only account we have:

New Yorker version:  “Howard did not tell Corrie about the dinner party right away, because he hoped it would become unimportant.”

Dear Life version: “Howard said that he had not told Corrie about the dinner party right away, because he hoped it would become unimportant.”

One clue in all three versions that Ritchie has invented the letter from Sadie/Lillian is Howard’s quote from the letter: “I would hate to have to break the heart of such a nice lady with a big silver-fox collar on her coat.”  To this, Corrie responds, “How would Sadie know a silver-fox collar from a hole in the ground…? Are you sure that’s what she said.”  When Ritchie replies, “I’m sure,” Corrie says, “She’s learned things then.”  A bit later, Corrie says that Sadie/Lillian was not this smart before. However, when Corrie goes to the funeral reception and hears what others have said about Sadie/Lillian before she died, she knows that Sadie/Lillian has not learned to be scheming. 

Now, let’s look at the changes Munro makes in the ending of the story:


The New Yorker Oct 11, 2010 version:

           She gets up and quickly dresses and walks through every room in the house, introducing the walls and the furniture to this new idea.  A cavity everywhere, most notably in her chest.  She makes coffee and doesn’t drink it.  She ends up in her bedroom once more, and finds that the introduction to the current reality has to be done all over again.
            But then there is a surprise.  She is capable, still of shaping up another possibility.
            If he doesn’t known that Sadie is dead he will just expect things to go on as usual.  And how would he know, unless he is told? And who would he be told by, unless by Corrie herself?
            She could say something that would destroy them, but she does not have to.
            What a time it has taken her, to figure this out.
            And after all, if what they had—what they have—demands payment, she is the one who can afford to pay.
            When she goes down to the kitchen again she goes gingerly, making everything fit into its proper place.


The Pen/O.Henry Awards version, published April 2012:

          She gets up and quickly dresses and walks through every room in the house, introducing the walls and the furniture to this new idea.  A cavity everywhere, most notably in her chest.  She makes coffee and doesn’t drink it.  She ends up in her bedroom once more, and finds that the introduction to the current reality has to be done all over again.
            But then there is a surprise.  She is capable, still of shaping up another possibility.
            If he doesn’t known that Sadie is dead he will just expect things to go on as usual.  And how would he know, unless he is told? And who would he be told by, unless by Corrie herself?
            She could say something that would destroy them, but she does not have to.
            What a time it has taken her, to figure this out.
             She could say right now, what does it matter? Whatever goes on will go on.  Someday, she supposes, there will have to be an end to itBut in the meantime, if what they had—what they have—demands payment, she is the one who can afford to pay.
            When she goes down to the kitchen again she goes as if gingerly, making everything fit into a proper place.
            She has calmed down mightily. All right.            But in the middle of her toast and jam she thinks, No.            Fly away, why don’t you, right now? Fly away.            What rot.            Yes. Do it.


Dear Life version, published by Knopf, November 15, 2012.
(The Canadian version was published by Douglas Gibson Books on Oct. 13, 2012)

         She gets up and quickly dresses and walks through every room in the house, introducing the walls and the furniture to this new idea.  A cavity everywhere, most notably in her chest.  She makes coffee and doesn’t drink it.  She ends up in her bedroom once more, and finds that the introduction to the current reality has to be done all over again.
         The briefest note, the letter tossed.        ‘Lillian is dead, buried yesterday.’        She sends it to his office, it does not matter.  Special delivery, who cares?       She turns off the phone, so as not to suffer waiting.  The silence.  She may simply never hear again.        But soon a letter, hardly more to it than there was to hers.       ‘All well now, be glad. Soon.’       So that’s the way they’re going to leave it.  Too late to do another thing.  When there could have been worse, much worse.

The issue, of course, is whether Corrie will tell Ritchie that Sadie/Lillian is dead, and whether she will also tell him that she knows about his lie and his taking her money all these years. However, if she tells him she knows, she will have to end the relationship, and she does not want to do that.

In The New Yorker version, Corrie has not decided whither to tell him that Sadie/Lillian is dead, therefore allowing him to continue to take her money.

The PEN/O.Henry version emphasizes her vacillation between telling him what she knows and not telling him anything.

In the Dear Life version, Corrie has decided to tell Ritchie about Lillian’s death, but she has decided not to tell him that she knows of his lie and his money scheme. 

By telling Ritchie that Lillian is dead, Corrie effectively ends his taking more money from her, for now that she knows the money goes to Ritchie directly, she would feel as if she were paying for his company. The fact that Ritchie replies, “All well now, be glad.  Soon” means that the relationship can continue, for Corrie believes that Ritchie is not staying with her just for the money.

As far as I can determine, Munro has not made public why she made these changes to the ending of “Corrie.”  The Dear Life version may placate some readers who had no sympathy for Corrie’s reluctance in The New Yorker version to tell Ritchie about Sadie’s death.  But readers still may fault Corrie for not telling Ritchie that she knows about his secret. But how can she fault Ritchie for his secret about the money when she wants him to continue to maintain his secret about their relationship? 

I would be interested in hearing what my readers have to say about these three different endings to “Corrie.”

Wednesday, December 26, 2012

Notable Short Story Collections for 2012


Unfortunately, 2012 had no outstanding collections of short stories to match the two very fine collections of 2011:  Steven Millhauser’s We Others and Edith Pearlman´s Binocular Vision—that is, except, of course, Alice Munro’s Dear Life.

The New York Times selection of 100 Notable Books of 2012 (echoed by other such "Best of" lists) included the following six collections:

Blasphemy by Sherman Alexie
The Book of Mischief by Steve Stern
Dear Life by Alice Munro
Married Love by Tess Hadley
This is How You Lose Her by Junot Diaz
What We Talk About when We Talk About Anne Frank by Nathan Englander

I have not yet read Tess Hadley’s collection, although I have read several of her stories that have appeared in The New Yorker in the past few years.  I have not yet read Steve Stern’s collection and, sorry to say, am not familiar with his work. However, I have ordered both books and will read them in the next month and make some comments on them.

Of the four remaining books, it seems to me that only one is outstanding.  I am sure my readers will not be surprised to hear that my favorite is Alice Munro’s Dear Life.  I have commented on most of these stories over the past few years as they have appeared in The New Yorker and ask interested readers to check my previous blogs on Munro, easily found using the “search” line at the top right of this page.  I do plan to make some comments on three pieces in the “memoir” section of the book next month, as well as some additional comments on the story “Corrie,” about which there was quite a bit of discussion on this blog.  I will especially focus on how Munro changed the ending of the story as it appears in Dear Life.

I also refer my readers to my previous blogs on the Sherman Alexie, Nathan Englander, and Junot Diaz collections—none of which I think adds anything to the reputation of these writers.  The Alexie collection is a “new and selected” batch, valuable for his best older stories, but not very interesting for the “new” ones.  Alexie may have grown a bit too smug as a showman these days to devote himself to writing fine short stories.  The Englander collection, which won some important awards (although I really don’t’ know why), is just more clever O. Henryish tales that Englander has done before, and (sigh) will probably do again.  The Diaz is just one more set of tedious crude exploits of Yunior-- this time focusing primarily on his ineffective experiences with women and his snappy street chatter.

All four books—Munro, Alexie, Englander, and Diaz—seem to have sold rather well—even spending some time on the best seller lists.  And that’s a good thing for the short story.  The Munro stories are about as good as they get; the stories in the other four collections are lightweight—amusing, self-indulgent, just not very challenging or revealing about the complexities of human experience and emotion.

Oh, just to assure readers who also love the novel form that I do have some familiarity with that “baggy monster,” I have read at least three novels on The New York Times 2012 notable list: Zadie Smith’s NW, Barbara Kingsolver’s Flight Behavior, and Colm Tobin’s The Testament of Mary. The Kingsolver is a rambling popular fiction with a social message that goes on and on and on about global warming.  The Smith is a “postmodern” (whatever that is) experiment about fiction, culture, and individual identity—challenging but sometimes too self-consciously so. The Tobin is a novella about the adult life and death of Jesus told by his mother—the focus more on mother-stuff than on Jesus-stuff.  If you want be feel socially conscious, read the Kingsolver; if you want to feel intellectually experimental, read the Smith; if you want to feel cynical about the origins of the Church, read the Tobin.

I wish all my readers a most happy new year and thank them for visiting this blog, reading my remarks, and sometimes even taking the time to respond to those remarks.  I apologize for making that process a little more difficult recently by establishing a login, but I was getting bombarded daily by junk mail that I had to delete, often accidently deleting valuable comments by my readers. 

Happy New Year! See you in 2013, my friends!

--Charles

Friday, December 14, 2012

Steven Millhauser’s “A Voice in the Night” and Flannery O’Connor’s Romance Short Fiction




As I have mentioned before, I much admire the stories of Steven Millhauser.  If you have not read his “new and selected stories,” We Others, published last year, you owe it to yourself to buy it for you and your best friend for Christmas, or whatever end-of-the year holiday you favor.

I like Millhauser’s new story, “A Voice in the Night,” in the Dec. 10 issue of The New Yorker. Every author has been asked the question at a reading a lecture, or an interview: “Where do you get your ideas?”  Steven Millhauser’s answer is: “a voice in the night.”  I think it is a good metaphor for the compulsion one must have to be a writer. I firmly believe that to be a writer, you must feel an irresistible, inescapable compulsion to write.  I think of Raymond Carver, feeling frustrated because he is stuck in a Laundromat in Iowa City when he wants to be home writing, or when Alice Munro had to rent a little apartment to get away from her domestic chores long enough to write.  Both describe the need to write as something that calls them. Sherwood Anderson described his “voice in the night” in this way:

Having, from a conversation overheard […] got the tone of a tale, I was like a woman who has just become impregnated. Something was growing inside me. At night when I lay in my bed I could feel the heels of the tale kicking against the walls of my body.” 

All writers have also been asked at readings, lectures, and interviews, ” When did you decide to become a writer?”  Steven Millhauser’s answer in this story is: “Three thousand years ago in the temple of Shiloh.”  His story “A Voice in the Night” is his fictional account of the source of his writing obsession.

“A Voice in the Night” is divided up into four three-part sections:
Section I is a retelling of the story in 1 Samuel, Chapter 3, in which the boy Samuel, age 12, hears his named called in the night three times and thinks it is Eli, the high priest of the temple of Shiloh;
Section II takes place in 1950, in which an American boy age, seven, lies awake in his bed for four straight nights, thinking of the Samuel story and wondering if he will know how to respond if he hears a voice in the night;
Section III focuses on the boy at the age of sixty-eight, now an author, thinking about his father, his Jewish education, and his long-ago waiting for the voice in the night.

The story is about ‘being called” or “having a calling.” Once in high school, when the boy asked his father, a university professor, if he liked teaching, the father answered: “If I were a millionaire, I would pay for the privilege of teaching.”  The son is moved by this answer, knows he has heard something important, and is proud and envious of his father, thinking he wants to say that someday; he knows it is “a calling.  Samuel’s call in the night.”

The author’s childhood is filled with three elements that contribute to the writer’s calling:
 First, stories, in this case, stories from the Jewish tradition: Joseph in the pit, the parting of the Red Sea, David soothing the soul of Saul with his harp; and children’s tales of Rapunzel being called to let down her hair, Dr. Doolittle telling of the pushmi-pullyu’
 Second, the mysterious sounds of words, as when his father said the Rabbi was making boys jabber words they did not understand, calling it “pure gibberish.” And the boy liked that word for the sound of it—gibberish;
Third, sentences: his father tells him the three greatest opening sentences in all of literature are: “In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth”; “Call me Ishmael,” and the opening of the children’s book “Tootle”: Far, far to the west of everywhere is the village of Lower Trainswich.”

“A Voice in the Night” with the author seeing understanding the nature of his own calling:

“A calling. Not Samuel’s calling but another.  Not that way but this way. Samuel ministering unto the Lord; his father-teacher ministering unto the generations.  And the son? What about him?  Far, far to the west of everywhere, ministering unto the Muse.  Thanks, Old Sea-Parter, for leaving me be. Tired now.  Soon we’ll all sleep.”

“A Voice in the Night” not only responds to the questions, “Where do your stories come from? And “When did you become a writer,” it also responds to the kind of fiction that Millhauser finds most irresistible—the modern romance form, most often embodied in the short story form.

In the Oct 3, 2008 issue of the New York Times Sunday Book Review, Steven Millhauser published a short essay entitled “The Ambition of the Short Story.”
You can find it at:

I quote below the conclusion of that essay:

The short story believes in transformation. It believes in hidden powers. The novel prefers things in plain view. It has no patience with individual grains of sand, which glitter but are difficult to see. The novel wants to sweep everything into its mighty embrace — shores, mountains, continents. But it can never succeed, because the world is vaster than a novel, the world rushes away at every point. The novel leaps restlessly from place to place, always hungry, always dissatisfied, always fearful of coming to an end — because when it stops, exhausted but never at peace, the world will have escaped it.

The short story concentrates on its grain of sand, in the fierce belief that there — right there, in the palm of its hand — lies the universe. It seeks to know that grain of sand the way a lover seeks to know the face of the beloved. It looks for the moment when the grain of sand reveals its true nature. In that moment of mystic expansion, when the macrocosmic flower bursts from the microcosmic seed, the short story feels its power. It becomes bigger than itself. It becomes bigger than the novel. It becomes as big as the universe.
Therein lies the immodesty of the short story, its secret aggression. Its method is revelation. Its littleness is the agency of its power. The ponderous mass of the novel strikes it as the laughable image of weakness. The short story apologizes for nothing. It exults in its shortness. It wants to be shorter still. It wants to be a single word. If it could find that word, if it could utter that syllable, the entire universe would blaze up out of it with a roar. That is the outrageous ambition of the short story, that is its deepest faith, that is the greatness of its smallness.
 Before Millhauser, one of the most important advocates for this kind of fiction was Flannery O’Connor.  In the essay “The Grotesque in Southern Fiction,” in her collection Mystery and Manners, O’Connor claimed that the social sciences had “cast a dreary blight on the public approach to fiction.” (The paper was first read in 1960 at Wesleyan College for Women in Macon, Georgia; one can only wonder, had she lived, what she would have said fifty years later when social approaches to fiction have narrowed artistic and critical vision even more).  O’Connor complains that many readers and critics “demand a realism of fact which may, in the end, limit fiction’s scope, associating the only legitimate material for fiction with the movement of social forces, with the typical, with fidelity to the way things look and happen in normal life.

However, O’Connor’s “voice in the night” comes not as a demand for “realism of fact,” but rather for what she called “the modern romance tradition.”  I have discussed O’Connor’s role in this tradition in the introduction to the book I edited last year entitled Critical Insights:  Flannery O’Connor, and will not repeat here my comments there.  Both O’Connor and Millhauser’s identification with the romantic tradition of the romance explains why they are such masters of the short story form—a form that is much more aligned with “mystery” than with “manners.”  O’Connor says works in this tradition make alive some experience we are not accustomed to observe every day, experiences which ordinary folk may never experience in their ordinary lives.  She says the fictional qualities of the romance “lean away from typical social patterns, toward mystery and the unexpected” and that it is this kind of “realism” she wants to consider. It is a fiction that more closely aligned with poetry, a fiction that is “initially set going by literature more than by life.” 

O’Connor says if the writer believes that our life is and will remain essentially mysterious, “then what he sees on the surface will be or interest to him only as far as he can go through it into an experience of mystery itself.”  For the romance writer, “the meaning of a story does not begin except at a depth where adequate motivation and adequate psychology and the various determinations have been exhausted.”

When Frank Kermode in his Norton lectures several years ago asked, "Why Are Narratives Obscure?" he cited Kafka's parable  "Before the Law" in The Trial. It’s about a man who comes to beg admission to the Law but is kept out by a doorkeeper.  So he sits there year after year in inconclusive conversation with the doorkeeper outside the door unable to get in. When he is old and near death, he sees an immortal radiance streaming from the door.  He asks the doorkeeper why he alone has come to this door and receives this reply: "This door was intended only for you.  Now I am going to shut it."  A terrible parable, you would have to agree.  "To perceive the radiance of the shrine," says Kermode, "is not to gain access to it; the Law, or the Kingdom to those within, such as the doorkeeper, may be powerful and beautiful, but to those outside they are absolutely inexplicable.  This is a mystery.  While the insiders protect the Law without understanding it, the outsiders like us see an uninterpretable radiance and die."  A terrible parable indeed.

Kermode is concerned, of course, with the radiant obscurity of parables. The word “parable” is used in the Gospel of Mark as a synonym for "mystery."  It is the radiance Eudora Welty refers to when she says the "first thing we notice about our story is that we can't really see the solid outlines of it--it seems bathed in something of its own.  It is wrapped in an atmosphere.  This is what makes it shine, perhaps, as well as what initially obscures its plain, real shape." To Marlowe, sitting Buddha-like on the deck telling the story of Kurtz, to outsiders to the mystery, the "meaning of an episode was not inside like a kernel but outside, enveloping the tale which brought it out only as a glow brings out a haze, in the likeness of one of those misty halos that, sometimes, are made visible by the spectral illumination of moonshine."

Why is there more mystery in short stories than in novels?

First there is the historical and prehistorical source of the short story in myth and oral tale that, by its very nature, was concerned with mystery, for everything was mystery and story was the only explanatory model available.  A genre never completely departs from its origins.

Second, there is short story's dependence more on pattern than plot for its structure.  As a result of this dependence, the action of a short story is more apt to be organized around an implicit principle or idea rather than a series of events occurring causally in time

Third, there is the mystery of motivation in short stories.  It is not easy to determine why Bartleby prefers not to, what Roderick Usher is so afraid of.  Part of the problem may be the short story's close relationship to the romance form, which, allegorical in its nature, develops characters that, even as they seem to be like real people in the real world, are driven by the discourse demands of the narrative and thus act as if they are obsessed, propelled by some central force rather than merely logically, causally, or randomly.

Flannery O'Connor says "The type of mind that can understand good fiction is not necessarily the educated mind, but it is at all times the kind of mind that is willing to have its sense of mystery deepened by contact with reality and its sense of reality deepened by contact with mystery." 

Steven Millhauser, who hearkened to the “voice in the night,” would surely agree.

Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Reader Comments Oct. and Nov. 2012--Accidently Deleted


Thanks so much for your thoughtful reply, Eric.  I always know I can count on you to challenge me to further thinking about literary issues.  I am not really concerned with the reader’s recognition of short stories vs. novels generally.  Heft and length of reading are usually sufficient.  Poe’s single setting criteria could very well depend on how long one’s butt holds out.  One could very well get so caught up in a good detective novel that he or she will read all night in a single lying as it were.  The reading issue for me settles on the so-called novella, a category which I think Gatsby belongs to because of the symbolic structure and the stylistic tightness of the prose.  I did a blog post a while back on Colm Toibin’s novel Brooklyn, which I argued was structured and styled more like a novella than a novel.  I am now reading his new work, which he categorizes as a novella, entitled The Testament of Mary. I have posted some blogs in the past on what I think are the differences between novellas, short stories, and novels. More on this in the future, I reckon.  Thanks again for your helpful response.

Charles



Although simple word count sounds pedestrian, I don't think you should give up to quickly on scale as a way to define and classify prose fiction. Scale seems to be an essential aspect of reality, both physical and psychological. Baseballs and electrons can both be thought of as fundamentally quantum particles, but the baseball leads a very placid and Newtonian sort of life, where the electron jumps around so much in a space/time sort of way that it can practically be called a "cloud". Actually the baseball is doing the same thing, but, relative to its mass, the quantum jumps are the equivalent of nil. The same behavior but on different scales. Psychologically the quality of our experiences are also related to scale if not as drastically as electrons and baseballs. Poe's "single sitting" for example is a scalar explanation. As someone said, "quantity is a kind of quality". And scale I think would turn out to be more useful and sophisticated than just the idea of word count. on C.S Lewis on the Hidden Element in Stories and the Significance of Rereading
on 12/7/12

I also thought "Anything Helps" was a great story, but I also think it's a shaggy dog kind of story. on Best American Short Stories 2012—Part IV
Anonymous
on 12/3/12
Hi, Karen, good to hear from you. I will take another look at the Saunders story, for I have always admired his work. I got a nice note from Edith Pearlman, who liked my discussion of Honeydew. I am not sure about the Pushcart, for I have always found those selections uneven. I will take a look at it though. Thanks for your comments. And thanks for reading mine. on Best American Short Stories 2012: Part III
on 12/3/12
Hi, Prof. May, I've worked through this group: "Diem Perdidi" is incredibly beautiful. I listened to a wonderful NPR reading (three videos, about 9 minutes each; though it's a video, it's really audio only) which only made me love it more. Otsuka really has a gift, seen here and through The Buddha in the Attic, for using poetic style to tell a story. "Honeydew" bothered me at first – I so loved all those elements, but hated the ending tying up all the loose ends. Because of your comments, I tried again, and just like the Rubin Vase test where a vase becomes two profiles (or vice versa), I clicked on a kind of sardonic humor that changed the way I saw the whole piece. I still think I would've preferred that the story ended with the three of them in the woods, but there is a kind of bizarreness that works. "Occupational Hazard" seemed like it needed editing; it should've started with the funeral. I don't get what the girl's act with her mom, inspired by the father, had to do with on Best American Short Stories 2012: Part III
on 11/28/12
Eric, it is always good to hear from you. I just finished reading Gatsby again, for the upteenth time, and thank you for giving me the impetus to do so. You know, there are lots of books that one reads when young that pale when read again in the so called golden years. Catcher in the Rye was a disappointment to me when I reread it recently. However, I loved Gatsby all over again. A brilliant book, a kind of miracle of style and vision that Fitzgerald never really achieved again. The difference between the short story and the novel is not, for me, so much a matter of word length as it is a matter of technique. I realize there are some novelistic techniques in Gatsby, but basically I think it is a novella, in the tradition of Heart of Darkness, Billy Budd, The Bear, etc. And true novellas (as opposed to short novels) are, in my opinion, closer to the short story in technique than they are to novels. And it is that novella technique that makes me think Castle of Otranto is closer on C.S Lewis on the Hidden Element in Stories and the Significance of Rereading
on 11/26/12
John, I have not received my copy of Munro's new book yet, so do not know what changes she might have made in "Corrie" since it appeared in New Yorker. I will get back to you when I get the book later this week. on Alice Munro, "Corrie" New Yorker, Oct 11, 2010
on 11/26/12
I thought "Anything Helps" was a great story, maybe the best in the collection. Not a wasted line. And certainly moving, maybe the most moving piece in the lot.. Other than that, I definitely agree with your other evaluations. I wasn't a fan of the Wilson story, either. A great dialogue exchange with the director and the pet wrangler, but beyond that, kind of meh.. on Best American Short Stories 2012—Part IV
Anonymous
on 11/21/12
Read a review of Munro's new anthology in our local paper this a.m. Intrigued by the reviewer's one-sentence reference to "Corrie". Downloaded the book. Read "Corrie" first. Was fooled and felt foolish as the last paragraphs went by. Wanted to plumb what this story's story was and found your post (among not-so-well-thought-others). Thanks. on Alice Munro, "Corrie" New Yorker, Oct 11, 2010
John Read
on 11/18/12
And perhaps Castle of Otranto which you discuss as a short fiction (in the Poe Study), if not short story, but which at 35,000 words is quite a bit shorter than Gatsby, but still long for a short story. on C.S Lewis on the Hidden Element in Stories and the Significance of Rereading
on 11/17/12
I know your book on Poe, when I became interested in short stories and saw that your blog was by the same guy who wrote your Study of Poe's Short Fiction, I started to follow the blog. During Sandy I reread it by LED lamp, and am very glad I did. It's not very long, but hardly modest. And you can congratulate yourself for writing some deep, if brief, discussions of Poe's short fiction without much lit crit jargon at all. I am reading it through yet again but this time rereading the Poe story discussed. For some reason I have a lot of problems wrapping my head around Metzengerstein, and your discussion was very helpful. I am trying to write some of my own thoughts on some of Poe's fictions, and frankly was very impressed with your straightforward approach, which I feel is absolutely essential. I am also trying to read more of the coeval German romantics, especially Tieck. If a couple of those guys had been fused int the same person perhaps there would have been a German Poe, on Terrence Holt's In The Valley of the Kings and Edgar Allan Poe
on 11/14/12
You said "The Great Gatsby is my favorite novel, but that is because, in my opinion, it is more a long short story than it is a short novel." I think discussing your ideas about that would make a very interesting post, that would have to go in some measure to the crux of what a short story is, if it can be as long as a 50,000+ words. Eric on C.S Lewis on the Hidden Element in Stories and the Significance of Rereading
on 11/14/12
I was puzzled to see that Axis is not in Munro's new collection. That decision intrigues me. Best American Short Stories but not Dear Life? Why? I'll be thinking about that as I make my way through Dear Life. on Best American Short Stories 2012: Part II
Susan
on 11/7/12
My reactions to "Paramour" and "Volcano" were the reverse of yours - I was more interested in "Paramour," the idea of how new knowledge changes how we feel about past events, and the interesting wording of the ending paragraph – the narration isn't through Christine any more, but she'd probably find the last sentence kind of startling. And creepy. Whereas I couldn't overcome my intense feeling of unfairness generated by "Volcano" – and it felt kind of standard psych-horror, lifted up a notch by the lucid dreaming seminar. But the sensuality of the story was pretty remarkable. I loved "Navigators" – it's my favorite in the volume so far, because it conveys this heartbreaking situation in such a strange context. It's the kind of read-between-the-lines thing I love. I'm curious to see how it plays out with those with no gaming background at all. Interesting this is the second year in a row a heavy-duty gaming story, telling a story through the game itself, has been included in BASS ( on Best American Short Stories 2012: Part II
on 11/7/12
I'm so glad you're going through BASS 2012 story by story. I liked "…Anne Frank" a lot more than when I read it back in its TNY run, mostly because I stopped trying to compare it trope for trope to the original. It was the choreography, who touches whom, who snipes at whom, where they are and where they go, the claustrophobic pantry, that really sold me. "Pilgrim Life" reminded me of "After Ellen," a TNY story from the summer that I truly hated, and I couldn't get past it, but I thought it was better. At least there was movement. But yeah, I agree, the loser thing annoys me. "The Other Place" felt like a manipulation to me. But that's me. Who am I to argue with Mary Gaitskill. I loved "Last Speaker" with its flawed characters who love each other anyway – and the tiny bits of humor (the wheelchair might be a feature rather than an obstacle…lol). And the daughter who changed her name, which the mother never realized was possible – that projects something into the future. I on Fourth Anniversary of Reading the Short Story: Reading Best American Short Stories: 2012
on 11/7/12
very nice blog sir , i read your bio also its glad to know that you have teaching experience of 40 years . on Frank O'Connor Short Story Award Shortlist: 2012-- Kevin Barry's Dark Lies the Island
on 11/4/12
Don't apologise, Charles. I like reading your thoughts and chewing over them. And this theme, of the grasp at timelessness and the inevitable falling back, is one of the great themes, as you eloquently point out. I was reminded, in another context - thinking about the relationship between literary and musical forms - of Proust, and of Orpheus, who has to look back.... on C.S Lewis on the Hidden Element in Stories and the Significance of Rereading
on 11/4/12
Dorothy, The Great Gatsby is my favorite novel, but that is because, in my opinion, it is more a long short story than it is a short novel. And yes, I agree that what Lewis describes as something that is timeless is something that Gatsby tries to embody in Daisy. When he must face the reality that she is only a temporal event in space--mere flesh--and therefore subject to all that flesh is heir to, the loss is too great. The green light that he yearns to reach out for (which is untouchable) is already behind him and therefore accessible only in the imagination. When Nick tells Gatsby he can't repeat the past, he is incredulous, insisting that, of course he can. All religion and all art aspire in some way to defeating time. So, we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past because even as we know we cannot escape time, cannot, as we live achieve timelessness, we continue to beat on--like Ahab, like Kurtz, like Oedipus, like Hamlet, and on and on. So on C.S Lewis on the Hidden Element in Stories and the Significance of Rereading
on 11/4/12
It's October 31st today and i didn't feel I could write to anybody living in America without expressing my sorrow for all those who've suffered in the terrible storm. I wanted to pick up on one of your quotes from CS Lewis. 'We grasp at a state and find only a succession of events in which that state is never quite embodied.' For some reason, this made me think of the green light at the end of Daisy's dock, at the end of 'The Great Gatsby'. I wondered whether the green light might have been, for Gatsby, an instance of what Lewis is talking about. And I wanted to ask you - because surely you will have thought about it - why the green light is already behind Gatsby (at the time Nick is talking about) and what is happening with time in these last paragraphs of the story. on C.S Lewis on the Hidden Element in Stories and the Significance of Rereading
on 10/31/12
Thanks for this, Jay. I am looking forward to the book--I always look forward to a Munro collection. I don't know why she left Axis out; it is in the new Best American Short Stories Collection. I will take a look at the changes Munro has made, especially in "Corrie," which was debated quite a bit on my blog and others. I don't like the sound of "Finale" either; and the title "Dear Life" has a valedictory tone to it also, don't you think? Especially since "Dear Life" first appeared in the New Yorker not as a story, but as a memoir. Thanks for reading my blog, Jay. I appreciate it. on Alice Munro's "Amundsen" and The Stories in Her New Book, Dear Life
on 10/29/12
Hi, Dorothy. Thanks for reading my blog. I have heard other short story writers talk about the form in terms of a musical form. It seems that sometimes the subject of the story is not as important as the pattern or rhythm. I have read a number of stories in the present tense. The problem I have with some of them is that they neglect one of the primary aspects of "story" as an event that occurred in the past, as an event that the storyteller feels has a sense of completion--not just one thing after another. on Is the Short Story an Obsessive, Unnatural Form?
on 10/29/12
I ordered a copy of the new collection (it's already out in Canada), and just finished reading it. Wonderful stuff, needless to say. It's worth re-reading the stories that have been printed in the various publications, since Munro has made some changes. (For instance, I believe she adds a paragraph to the end of "Corrie" that quite changes the story.) All the stories Munro has published since TOO MUCH HAPPINESS are collected, with the exception of "Axis". I wonder why Munro decided to omit that one, and I'm curious to see if it shows up in a book in the future. I certainly hope we see more collections, though I have to say that there was a slight valedictory air to the last four stories in DEAR LIFE, which Munro includes under the heading "Finale". What a wonder Munro is! The only complaint I have about the book is the decision to put "To Reach Japan" first. Generally, short story collections should open and close with their strongest stories, right? So I was a bit flummoxed on Alice Munro's "Amundsen" and The Stories in Her New Book, Dear Life
Jay
on 10/29/12
Thanks for saving me $14.95!!! on Junot Diaz’s This is How You Lose Her
on 10/28/12
This is a PS to my last comment. What do you think of the current fashion of writing solely in the present tense, (both novels and short stories)? It suddenly occurred to me to put the question to you. on Is the Short Story an Obsessive, Unnatural Form?
on 10/28/12
Thank you for these insights, Charles. I've read several of your posts now, and they always give me food for thought. I think, from the perspective of writing short stories as compared with novels, the unity is as much one of pitch and tone as other qualities. I'm conscious of this as I write, how the pitch of a story is intense and unsustainable over time, how I could not and would not wish to sustain it. It often helps me to think in relation to musical forms. on Is the Short Story an Obsessive, Unnatural Form?
on 10/28/12
I got quite tired of reading Diaz's stories as they kept popping up in The New Yorker. On my blog, I've become quite grumpy about his work and there have been some interesting arguments in the comments sections between those who think like I do and those who defend him, only I've yet to read a convincing defense. Ah well, I'm sure we'll be hearing his name throughout the awards season this year. on Junot Diaz’s This is How You Lose Her
on 10/26/12
You seem like you need to do something other than read another short story. Maybe write one. on Junot Diaz’s This is How You Lose Her
Anonymous
on 10/25/12
I haven't read him. The quotes you use make him sound interesting but,I appreciate your bucking the headwind of flattering commentary. on Junot Diaz’s This is How You Lose Her
Anonymous
on 10/23/12
Yes, indeed. I think the short story is "mostly" interested in the everyday world to the extent that it can be transformed into significance. I think there is indeed a category of experience one could call the "personally mythic." In fact, I am not sure I know what a universal sacredness is; I think sacred is always personal; when it becomes other, it becomes a "church" and thus social. on The Profane and the Sacred: Novel vs. Short Story
on 10/20/12
Do you think there could be a middle ground in the short story? Something that is beyond profane but, only personally mythic and not touching a universal sacredness. on The Profane and the Sacred: Novel vs. Short Story
Anonymous
on 10/20/12
Thanks for this wonderfully detailed comment, Michael. I am sorry I do not have the time to respond to it as it deserves at this moment. However, when Munro's new book comes out, I plan to look carefully to see if she has tweaked the story (as she often does). I will get back to this when I get the book. on Alice Munro's "Corrie": Secrecy and Point of View
on 10/20/12
As usual, good to hear from you. I am glad you have discovered Valley of Kings. And, of course, Poe has always been a favorite of mine. I tried in my modest little book on Poe to explain how and why he became such a master of the short story. It is surprising just how many authors have been influenced by Poe, don't you think? For example, John Barth has said he owes much to Poe. I think Millhauser is indebted to Poe as is George Saunders. on Terrence Holt's In The Valley of the Kings and Edgar Allan Poe
on 10/20/12
Steve, thanks for this information. I am surprised that "Axis" is not in the collection since it is in the new Best American Short Stories collection. I look forward to reading the two previously unpublished stories. on The Profane and the Sacred: Novel vs. Short Story
on 10/20/12
Thanks very much for this, Sandra. I always appreciate your comments. I am not arguing that the novel never deals with the sacred and the profane, but rather that the short story is, from its very beginning, based on the human encounter with the tension between the sacred and the profane. I think, as opposed to the novel, which is most often focused on social issues, the short story is more often focused on personal spiritual issues. I hope to make this clearer in my book; or I should say, I "must" make this clear in the book. Thanks again. on The Profane and the Sacred: Novel vs. Short Story
on 10/20/12
Thanks for you comment, Carmen. What you would like most in a book such as I am working on is precisely what I hope to make it. I appreciate your reading my blog. on How-to-Read Books and New Book on Reading Short Stories
on 10/20/12
Thanks for your comments, Kelly. And thanks much for checking out my blog. Denis Johnson's collection is an important one, it seems to me. I look forward to hearing from you again. on Denis Johnson's "Emergency": Puzzle the Prof Contest--Short Story Month 2011
on 10/20/12
Love your interpretation. I looked at it from the vantage point of the Vietnam War and the blindness/justification towards it: We killed the mother and saved the children; Neil Young reference/our bumbling about like the incompetent doctor/Fat Quivering Nurse worried only about herself and her family. Will definitely return to this piece again and again, as both a writer and a reader. on Denis Johnson's "Emergency": Puzzle the Prof Contest--Short Story Month 2011
on 10/12/12
Thank you so much for working on this project. As a short story writer, I wanted to give you my input. I think a book that shows general readers (especially those who "prefer novels") how to appreciate short stories is sorely needed. There are plenty of how-to-write books and writing workshops for short story writers. What I would like to see is something I can hand my mother, roommate or ESL student, that will leave them with a better understanding of why the short story can be a fascinating and beautiful form. Selfishly, what I would most like is a book that would help people understand why I love what I read and write. on How-to-Read Books and New Book on Reading Short Stories
on 10/11/12
Charles - not related to your post, but I thought you'd want to know that the table of contents of Munro's "Dear Life" is now visible on Amazon.ca (since the Canadian publ. date is earlier than the US one). Fourteen stories, two previously unpublished, and of her recent published work "Axis" (New Yorker, Jan. 2011) is not included. on The Profane and the Sacred: Novel vs. Short Story
Steve
on 10/9/12
This is fascinating to me. But in the back of my mind I wonder what you say about the novels of Hilary Mantel in particular the 'who am I' question posed throughout regarding Cromwell. (Wolf Hall and Bring Up the Bodies) It does seem to me she straddles the novel and short story in how she writes the profane (the historical events) and the sacred (the moral dilemmas and complexities of self). Have I missed the point about this separation of novel and short story? Thank you so much for a unique and outstanding blog. on The Profane and the Sacred: Novel vs. Short Story
on 10/7/12
Just finished In The Valley Of Kings which I would no doubt not have read without having read your post. So thanks for that. I fervently admire Poe's writings (I believe Pym to be as overlooked a masterpiece as overlooked can be), and it was worth reading Holt just to try to pick up the references to different tales. There was some strong Kafka influences in there too. I don't know if it is a novella or short story but the title piece was VERY well constructed, kind of like the Pit and the Pendulum with no way out. Anyway thanks for the recommend and if you know of any other good literature that is similarly Poe-etic, I would be glad to know of it. Personally I think Poe was right, the essential possibility of the short story is to hold it in the mind all at once, that it is short. Just about everything else is more or less true about shorter or longer forms. Des Esseintes or Mersault is as artificial and marginal as Bartleby or Roderick Usher. Oh, by the way, in terms of my on Terrence Holt's In The Valley of the Kings and Edgar Allan Poe
on 10/5/12
Hello, I've just redd Munro's story as appears in the Pen/O. Henry anthology, and the reason I Googled this story (and found your page) is that I wanted to see if anyone had understood the structure as I had. From your discussion, it looks to me as if everyone is unduly simplifying (or complicating?) the terms of what Munro does. That is, everyone accepts implicitly that Corrie's conclusion is correct and is trying to decide if Munro cheated. This seems wrong to me in the first place. The story hinges on how Corrie perceives herself: as damaged, as self-deprecating under "her self-satisfaction, if that's what it was", as "lucky" for whatever scraps she can claim, as precisely the sort of person who deserves to "pay" and be tricked. This doesn't have to be something Howard does to her, although it may work just fine in his favor. Munro tells us that Corrie has come to her conclusion in the night, but Munro doesn't tell us Corrie is correct, nor does she provide evidence that she is. on Alice Munro's "Corrie": Secrecy and Point of View
Anonymous
on 10/1/12
Anonymous
on 9/27/12
Thanks, Sandra. When someone who never reads lit crit finds my own writing helpful, that is about the best complement I could receive. Above all else, I want to be readable and helpful. on Is the Short Story an Obsessive, Unnatural Form?
on 9/25/12
I write and read short stories. I almost never read lit crit but I find that your writing informs my own esthetic for writing as well as reading. I look forward to your upcoming book on Reading the Short Story. on Is the Short Story an Obsessive, Unnatural Form?
on 9/25/12
It is wonderful to come across something brand new. I've been reading Lewis for years but never heard of "On Stories". Thank you for the information! I'm going to begin my search for this book immediately. nortonliterature.blogspot.com on C.S Lewis on the Hidden Element in Stories and the Significance of Rereading
on 9/24/12
Thanks for writing, Jay. I too like Richard Yates's stories, although I think he is a better novelist. I have written about his stories and agree that Eleven Kinds of Loneliness is a better collection than Liars in Love. Yates provides me with an interesting opportunity to discuss the problem of "realism" in short stories. I will see if I can find the piece I did a few years ago on Yates's stories. on 200 Short Stories I admire From Boccaccio up to the 21st Century
on 9/21/12
Good to hear from you, Michael. I have listened to David Means' reading of "Chef's House' and his discussion of the story, which I like. I also am a great admirer of Means'stories and have posted more than one blog essay on his work. Glad you agree with me about Toibin, who is a better novelist than a short story writer in my own humble opinion. on Colm Tóibín’s THE EMPTY FAMILY: 2011 Frank O'Connor Short Story Award Shortlist