I always check The New York Times Notable Books list each year, because, you know,
being in New York, where all the publishers are, they are supposed to know what
they're doing. On their Fiction list
this year, they chose only five collections of short stories. (By the way,
speaking of New York: I am currently
reading MFA vs. NYC, edited by Chad
Harbach, which contains pieces about the "two centers of gravity of
American fiction," by writers, critics, students, and profs. I will make some comments on it in March).
Of course, George Saunders' Tenth of December was a NYT Notable, for
it was everywhere this past year. Like
everyone else, I admired the collection and wrote a couple of blogs on it when
it first came out. It was chosen for NPR's
Best list (along with Karen Russell's Vampires in a Lemon Grove, on which I also
commented in an earlier post), Both
these books were chosen by The Huffington
Post and Tenth of December was chosen by The Washington Post and The
Daily Beast and made the shortlist for The
Story Prize and a whole basketful of other prizes. Such publicity, like that surrounding Alice
Munro's Nobel Prize win, is good for the often neglected short story.
Also chosen by The New York Times was Jamie Quatro's I Want to Show You More, on which I commented on April 22, just after
it came out (I did not particularly like it); and the collection of long
stories, Dirty Love, by Andrew Dubus
III, which I definitely did not like (You can see my comments on a January 19,
2014 post, if you are of a mind).
I just finished reading the two
collections on the NYT Notable list I missed when they first came out—Aimee Bender's
The Color Master and Ramona Ausubel's
A Guide to Being Born-- entertaining but
definitely underwhelming in my opinion.
As usual, after I finished reading the books, I surveyed the reviews,
primarily those in print, but also some on line. I was once questioned about how dare I write
a review after having read other reviews.
My answer was: It has never been
my intention on this blog to write reviews of books, but rather to discuss
issues relevant to reading and studying short stories; often such issues arise
from checking what other commentators have said about short stories. I try to
follow the advice I always gave my students: Do your research; see what other
folks think before you develop your own thoughts; you may just be repeating what
has already been well expressed.
Although I often try to give my
readers some idea of what collections I read are like overall, I don't think a
series of summaries are of much value. I prefer to focus on only one or two
stories contained therein—usually my favorite (for I prefer to talk about
stories I like rather than stories I do not, unless, of course, they illustrate
an important short story issue) and to discuss the issues the stories raise in
a bit more depth than newspaper reviewers usually do.
Aimee Bender's new collection got
more reviews--practically all of them favorable—than Ramona Ausubel did. But then, Bender has been around a bit longer
and published more books than Ausubel, including two previous collections of
short stories, The Girl in the Flammable
Skirt and Willful Creatures; this
is Ausubel's first collection of stories, although her novel No One Is Here Except Us got good
notices when it came out.
Bender's stories are primarily "concept"
stories; that is, they are based on a kind of "what if" premise; for
example, what if a woman agrees to have sex with her husband only if he pays
her for it; what if a woman asked two male friends to have sex for her viewing
pleasure? Many of the Bender stories are
whimsical, clever, and, it seems to me, inconsequential—savagely sweet, but
basically just empty calories. I have no objections to such stories; I often
enjoy them, but like other sugary products, a little goes a long way, and too
much might make you feel bloated. Everything depends on the cunning originality
of the concept of the story and the controlled cleverness of the writing. Bender is both cunning and clever.
However, the two most interesting
stories in the collection are based on concepts that Bender did not create, but
that she got from a previous bit of artifice. "Tiger Mending" is a
narrative version of a painting by artist Amy Cutler, and the title story—the most
talked-about story in the collection—is based on Perrault's seventeenth-century
fairy tale, "Donkeyskin."
Bender is often placed in a category
of writers who have mastered—in one degree or another—the fabulist or fantasy
story—e.g. the omnipresent George Saunders, the more profound (in my opinion)
Steven Millhauser, the deeply darker Angela Carter, the often brilliant Italo
Calvino, and the up-and-coming Karen Russell. Most of Bender's stories, to my
mind, are less complex and less thought-provoking than those of Calvino, Carter,
Saunders, and Millhauser.
The Perrault fairy tale on which Bender's
title story is based, "Donkeyskin," can be googled online, if you want
to read what inspired Bender to write this story. The story is about a king who
owns a donkey that poops gold coins. When the queen is dying, she makes her
husband promise that when she is gone he will marry a woman wiser and more
beautiful than she is. Of course, the only woman in the kingdom who fits that
description is the king's daughter.
The Princess's fairy godmother advises
the distraught daughter to agree to the King's proposal of marriage only if he
can fill various seemingly impossible requests: The first is a dress the color
of the sky, which he fulfills; the second is a dress the color of the moon,
which he fulfills. The third is the skin
of the prized gold-producing donkey, which he also fulfills. The fairy
godmother then advises her to disguise herself in the donkey skin and run away
to a far country, which she does. But
she is so repulsive looking no one will give her shelter or work. In this new country
there is a young prince who happens to see her wearing her dress the color of
the sky. He falls so in love with her that
he sinks into a deadly melancholy, insisting that the donkeyskin girl make him
a cake with her own hands. Her ring
falls into the batter and when the Prince finds it, he institutes a search for
who the ring will fit.
Of course, in Cinderella fashion, all works
out as we would wish and they live happily ever after. The moral is, " It is better to undergo
the greatest hardships rather than to fail in one's duty, that virtue may
sometimes seem ill fated, but will always triumph in the end."
Bender combines the medieval milieu
of the original fairytale with a modern era in which the narrator works in a fancy
store that is "Ex-Pen-Sive." The story begins with a Duke who
requests a pair of shoes the color of rock so that when he walks on rocks, it
will seem that he is floating. The workers in the shop attend modern-sounding
"visualization seminars" where they try to imagine what it was like
to be a rock, and finally summon the Color Master for help by sending, in
medieval fashion, a goat to fetch her.
The Color Master has the special
ability to see the world in a thousand times more detail than others. When she sees a tomato, for example, she sees
blues and browns and curves and indentations, shadow and light--not just a
pleasant looking fruit. She develops a
color for the shoes that makes the narrator feel the original mountain from
whence the colors came in the room; she shoes looks like the rocks themselves.
Later, the king requests a dress the
color of the moon, as in the original Perrault tale, but the Color Master is
ill, dying she says, and the task falls to the narrator. With her workers, she engages in a
creative-writing exercise (ala U. of Iowa Workshop) about their first memory of
the moon and how it affected them. The
Color Master advises the narrator that she should make sure to put anger in the
dress color because the king wants to marry his own daughter; however, she
forgets to do so.
The king next asks for a dress the color
of the sun; again the Color Master who is getting weaker, tells her to put
righteous anger into the color of the dress. Again, she neglects to do so. It is with the request for the third dress,
the color of the sky, that the narrator understands that the Color Master wants
anger in the color of the dress, not for any cultural taboo reasons or for any
biological risk, but rather for a logic the Color Master states forthrightly:
"You birth someone. And then you release her. You do not marry her, which is a bringing back
in. You let her go."
When the Color Master dies, the
narrator finds her true anger at the injustice of her loss, and she wants to
shake her fists at the heavens: "We shake our fists at the big blue
beautiful indifferent sky, and the anger is righteous and strong and helpless
and huge." Of course, the narrator
becomes the new Color Master, and the Princess escapes her father's demands.
Karen Ausubel is also often placed
in a category of writers given to fabulism and fantasy, e.g. Lydia Davis, Kevin
Brockmeier, and Steven Millhauser, although she is not, to my mind, as
mind-bending as they are. Like Bender's
stories, the pieces in A Guide to Being
Born are concept stories. What if
people grew a new hand (the better to touch you with, my dear) whenever they
fell in love with someone? What if the
concept of a "chest of drawers" were literalized to the extent that a
soon-to-be father, who by his own biology cannot give birth, grows drawers in
his chest into which he places tiny toy babies to compensate for his essential
emptiness? What if a woman who has been raped by a stranger fantasizes giving
birth to various nonhuman creatures, including a giraffe? Ouch!
The most emotionally complex story,
it seems to me, is the opening story "Safe Passage." It is a curious
choice for the introductory story, for in its fantasy concept—a bunch of grandmothers
on a sort of purgatorial ship headed toward whatever lies ahead when one dies—is
so disorienting that one might be tempted to read no farther, or at least skip
ahead to more easily grasped concepts, of which there are several.
"Safe Passage" opens with
these sentences: "The grandmothers—dozens of them--find themselves at sea.
They do not know how they got there."
Of course, to be "at sea" is an idiom for being lost, and the
grandmothers are indeed lost, in the ultimate sense, for they are in a
seemingly in-between state, asking "are we dead? Are we dying?" Why
this state of being is objectified as being on a freighter is not quite clear,
except for the fact that Alice and her second husband once traveled by
freighter. The central character, Alice, remembers a hospital room with beeping
machines behind her. Much of the story
describes the general state of being grandmothers, e.g. living alone, watching
television all day, eating frozen dinners, etc.
The story seems to suggest that all
that is happening is a pre-death dream or fantasy of Alice, as she recalls her past
two husbands and fantasizes about the
lives of women her age who are also nearing death. However, a great deal goes on in the fantasy
that does not seem to be unified around a central theme or concept about death
in general or Alice in particular. When
Alice lowers herself into the water by a rope ladder she has made, she wonders
whether her two husbands will be hers again. As the ship moves away from her,
she floats on her back, dives into the water and flips back again, in elegant
gestures that seem to signify her letting go of life. The final image is of her throwing her arms
wide in a "ta-da" position, and the water flying off her arms in a
great "celebration of sparks."
I like Bender's "Color Master" and
Ausubel's "Safe Passage" because they are more ambitious in intention
and execution than the more trivial stories, played mainly for cleverness, in
these two collections. However, I am
never quite sure of the integrity of the theme of "Color Master," for
the anger the Color Master feels about the king's demands on his daughter do
not seem to be grounded in anything more profound than, "you just don't do
that." And the grandmother's
fantasy about being on a freighter, which is at the heart of the Ausubel story,
does not seem grounded in anything intrinsic to the kind of experience the
grandmother imagines she is having.
In short, a "concept" story
by its very nature, depends on the significance of the concept explored; it
seems to me that neither of these stories seems unified successfully around a
coherent and profound mystery of human experience.