Most of the longer stories in Best
British Short Stories 2016 are in the final quarter of the book,
approximately 20 pages each. Nicholas Royle has also reserved the last quarter
of the book for the best-known writer in the anthology (at least best-known to
me) Janice Galloway. Her story,
"Distance," is from her new collection Jellyfish. Also represented
in this final quarter of the book is the author who has received the most
attention this year, Claire-Louise Bennett. Her story "Control
Knobs," is from her very well-received and much talked-about book Pond, which reviewers are reluctant to
call a collection of short stories, but prefer to label as a novel or a
novella, or maybe a collection of soliloquies, dramatic monologues, essays,
meditations, etc.
Kate Hendry, "My Husband
Wants to Talk to Me Again"
But first, there is one more very short anecdotal story to mention,
Kate Hendry's "My Husband Wants to Talk to Me Again." In five pages,
Hendry gives us the voice of a wife who has agreed to what appears to be an
amicable divorce and wants to get on with it, for there are things to be done
"separately." But the husband
wants to talk about things, primarily the division of property, e.g. who gets
the Marvin Gaye CDs. She, however, just
wants him out of her face so she can get the laundry done.
She thinks, with some relief, that in a few weeks she will be doing
washing for three rather than four, but still resents every heavy pair of jeans
he puts in the hamper. She is willing to let him have everything he wants, if
he will just get the hell out of the way and let her do the wash. She thinks
once he is out of the house she is going to treat herself to a tumble
dryer. And she is going to buy a DIY
how-to book so she can take care of the little fix-it chores he always did.
The story ends with him off to work, and her, with mixed feelings about
the silence in the house, with only the sounds she now makes—"The suck of
water as it drains from the sink, mugs on their hooks chiming against each
other, the end of conversation."
It's a neat, tidy little story that very capably captures the mixture of
relief and regret, hope and fear, distraction and focus that characterizes the
breakup of a marriage. If you have ever
been there, you will recognize it. I have been there.
Graham Mort, "In Theory,
Theories Exist"
I have also been where Ralph, the central character in Graham Mort's
story, has been. He is fifty-four, has
had by-pass surgery, and is on a hike up a mountain in the heat of the day—a
sort of "prove-it-to-myself-by-God-I-can-doo-it" sort of hike. The story recounts what is on his mind during
the hike—some of which involves his lack-luster career as a lecturer at the
university, some of which involves his relationship with his lover, but much of
which involves his by-pass. The central
focus of the story might well be this sentence: "Being close to death had brought
him face to face with a vast ignorance. All the things he couldn't name and
didn't know."
The title of the story comes from his thinking of his physical
relationship with his lover, a theorist who spends his time with Foucault,
Derrida and Lacan, but who knows the secrets of touch. "In theory, theories exist. In practice they don't. Who was that?
Latour?"
Mort, who is professor of creative writing and
transcultural literature at Lancaster University, cited this same quote in an
interview in response to a question about whether he was conscious of
manipulating the reader during composition, making decisions about a story’s
structure, point of view, sequence of events, or whether they were engendered
incidentally as he concentrated on thematic qualities of the story.
Mort says he thought such formal effects were engendered through
the unfolding narrative, but he did not think they were entirely incidental or
accidental either. Then he cites the Bruno Latour statement:
‘In theory,
theories exist. In practice they do not.’ So the theory of ‘blanks, gaps and
indeterminacies’ is immensely useful in understanding how text and the reader
interact, and it offers a degree of rationale for the intended texture and
level of detail in our writing. But to what extent such ‘porous’ writing
becomes deliberately formulated as a result is hard to say. I prefer to think
that this knowledge becomes active at a tacit or even haptic level within the
kinetic writing process."
This response helps me understand the process of the character Ralph
coming to terms with his "vast ignorance." The story is about how
thinking about an experience is not the same as experiencing it, yet if one
never thinks about it, the experience may never really be experienced except in
an inchoate way. In an essay on Yeats and Philip Larkin, Seamus Heaney once
said, "when a poem rhymes,
when a form generates itself, when a metre provokes consciousness into new
postures, it is already on the side of life." Heaney's
remark echoes Anton Chekhov's statement about the "life" in short
stories as being the life of art, not the everyday life of external reality. I
am working on a long essay on Alice Munro, Flannery O'Connor, and
Eudora Welty, in which I explore this concept in some
depth.
More about that at another time.
Mort's story ends with Ralph
thinking: "The future was uncertain again and in a good way. It was a premonition, like poetry coming on, its
aura. The way things had to begin again
had to exist before they could mean anything." He finds some ripe blackberries which are
tart and sweet at once and he takes a drink of water that has the
brackish taste of soil and rock. "He never thought he would die."
The story explores the difference between the way an artist responds to
an experience and the way the rest of us do. I had a triple by-pass several
years ago, but I was not drawn to seek the formal elements of that experience,
nor was I impelled to impose formal elements on it. So, while the experience
became a story for Mort, for me it remained just something that happened.
Claire-Louise Bennett,
"Control Knobs"
Pond is Claire-Louise
Bennett's first book, and it has received a great deal of praise. First published in Ireland, then in England,
and finally in America, it includes 20 "pieces," originally called
"short stories" on the jacket cover, but later changed to "chapters,"
because, as we all know, novels sell better than short story collections. Some
reviewers reject the "short story" designation for the book as if
such a characterization would diminish the "pieces" in some way, i.e.
'These are not just short
stories."
I have not read the entire book, and, after having read "Control
Knobs" and the reviews, as well as listening to Bennett reading some other
"pieces" on line, I am not sure I am going to read it. Based on the
many reviews, I conclude that a young female academic who has stopped work on
her doctoral dissertation has decided to live in a small cottage on the west
coast of Ireland and has written a number of soliloquies or meditations on her
experience. The title of the resultant book, "Pond," has prompted
several reviewers to compare the book to Thoreau's Walden, albeit with significant differences. Reviewers have
rhapsodized over the voice of the book.
Here is what some reviewers have said:
Andrew Gallix: "One of the most striking aspects of this
extraordinary book is how well we get to know the narrator—whose brain and body
we inhabit—yet how little we know about her….. What Bennett aims at is nothing
short of a re-enchantment of the world.
Everyday objects take on a luminous, almost numinous quality."
Philip Maughan: "What makes the book unique is the voice in which
…moments are described—unfolding in a bird-like language that feels closer to
thought than public address…. Pond is
an account of the mind as it exists in solitude. It attempts to engage with the
universe at its fullest and not just the little portion of it we identify as
human."
Dwight Garner: "Ms. Bennett has a voice that leans over the bar
and plucks a button off your shirt. It delivers the sensations of Edna O'Brien's
rural Irish world by way of Harold Pinter's clipped dictums…. Pond is filled with short intellectual
junkets into many topics. At other times
it drifts, sensually into chapters that resemble prose poems. You swim through
this novel as you do through a lake in midsummer, pushing through both warm
eddies and the occasional surprisingly chilly drafts from below."
Catherine Taylor: "The idea of personhood as an elemental force is
central to the book, especially as realised in the figure of the self-sufficient,
inaccessible woman, unkempt in appearance, abstracted in thought, and sometimes
capaciously contrary."
Meghan O'Rourke: "Pond
is one of those books so odd and vivid that they make your own life feel
strangely remote…The stories shun conventional narrative devices (like plot),
instead dramatizing the associative movement of the narrator's 'mind in
motion.'"
Jia Tolentino: "What moves the reader forward is the sense the
stories convey of a real-time psychological fabric: the reader experiences the
narrator's world at the same pace she does, a thing chopped up into irregular
units organized by vague questions and obscurely colored moods."
With all this high praise for a collection of pieces or, as one reviewer
calls them, chapters that resemble short stories, I feel no real need to
discuss "Control Knobs," which is filled with what one reviewer
describes as "casual asides and existential ruminations" by a woman
whose control knobs for her kitchen stove get broken and she cannot find a
replacement—a domestic bit of trivia that leads her to contemplate death,
especially the possibility of suicide, as well as what it might be like to be
the woman in a novel she is reading who is the last person alive.
Thomas McMullan, "The Only
Thing is Certain is"
This is a story with a highly emotional center—the death and cremation
of a man's child—whose body has been vaporised by the highly efficient new
cremation methods so that there is literally nothing in the urn he takes away
from the mortuary. Indeed, the core of
the story is so emotionally dense that it hardly necessitates much language to
describe it. However, the story is
filled with a great deal of detail that, while it may exist primarily to help
the man avoid confronting the absence at the center of the story, seems
distractingly irrelevant.. I like the
story, but there just seems to be too much of it.
Stuart Evers, "Live from
the Palladium"
I like this story also. It is
the funniest story in the book. Indeed,
it is about being funny, about jokes, about comedy, about being a comic. The
central joke—a bit that repeats at various points in the story is the line the
central character's mother has taught him: "When I grow up I want to be a
proctologist." She reminds him that
the best jokes are always in the present tense. "You can depend on a
joke," she says, "A joke is always happening." It made me laugh
in the painful kind of way that good comedy always does.
Janice Galloway,
"Distance"
I first read Janice Galloway's fiction twenty-five years ago when her
collection Blood came out. At that
time, Peter Matthews in The Guardian
said her stories were the reverse of beautifully crafted. "Ugly,
discordant and truncated, they provide few of the obvious satisfactions of
compact characterisation and neat moral epiphany. Galloway probably feels that the traditional virtues
of the short story are too genteel for the primal anxieties and uncertainties
that interest her."
With all due respect to Mr. Matthews, although such a view may have
true for the British or Scottish short story a quarter of a century ago, it is
certainly not true now. Or perhaps Mr.
Matthews was just not familiar with the stories of James Kellman.
Galloway has not published short story collections for a time—too busy
making a name for herself as a Scottish novelist to be reckoned with. In her new collection Jellyfish, she says on the Acknowledgements page, "Publishers
are shy of short stories in the here and now, shy like people are shy of
three-legged puppies, which is to say they'd love to give them a home, but are
nervous of their apparent handicap in that they are not novels." When she
was interviewed by The Scotsman, she
said she was delighted that the publisher Freight Books was willing to take
this collection on. Does this mean she could not find a larger publisher to
take it on?
As Alistair Braidwood has noted, although publisher reluctance to risk
a collection of short stories may have been true in the past, some of the best
new fiction that has appeared in Great Britain recently has been in the form of
short stories—often by little known writers published by small, independent
publishers.
I have remarked on this rise of interest in the short story in Great Britain
before. This series of Best British Short
Stories, edited by Nicholas Royle, and published by Salt Publishing, is one
of the best examples of the new interest in the form, perhaps encouraged by the
increase of MFA writing programs in England in the past several years and the
willingness of small presses to publish short stories. If no one is reading
short stories but folks who want to write short stories, that may indeed be
audience enough to make it worth publishing them.
Reviewers of Jellyfish have
been happy to quote Galloway's remark about the short story, but they also have
been quick to notice one other quote from the book—David Lodge's remark,
"Literature is mostly about having sex and not much about having children;
life's the other way round."
Several reviewers, including The
Guardian's Stuart Kelly, have called attention to the fact that Galloway's
new stories suggest a shift in focus from the physical life of young woman to
"the parent-child bond." Royle
has chosen the last story in the collection—a story that several reviewers have
called the strongest in the book, "Distance," about a woman whose
three-year-old son splits his head on a sheet glass table and almost dies. The
child survives, but the mother, Martha, almost does not. Breaking up with her
husband and cutting herself off from her son, Martha, according to her puzzled
husband, has become "overcome by the horror of normal life" and has fallen
to pieces.
It's a powerful story fraught with mystery of motivation, as the woman
compares her situation to that of George Orwell, who took his four-year-old son
out into danger and then had to save him from drowning. When she gets cancer,
the doctor's news that it is treatable and that she has little to worry about, disappoints
rather than elates her. The story ends with her making a trip to Jura, the
island where she imagines Orwell in his "stupid little boat, imagining he
could spite the sea" and his son "that terrified boy." When she
accidently hits a stag, ignoring the danger, she gets out of her car and goes
to it, whispering to the panicked
animal, ""I'm here, "I'm here"—as a mother would try to
comfort a frightened and injured child.
"She was Martha. A rock. She was forty-one years old. And despite
herself, still here. Incapable of letting go."
It's a powerful story, and it makes it glad that Janice Galloway has
come back to the short story.
Thanks again to Nicholas Royle for this fine collection of British
Short Stories. I only hope that America
editors do as well in the O. Henry Prize
Stories 2016 and Best American Short
Stories 2016, which I will be reading and writing about in September and
October. I hope you will join me.